yeah well... lol. i get o.c.d. about detail and minutia. stuff like how the ink reacts when starting and finishing a line, is a big deal to me when drawing. i've been asked so many times about that. i should take some macro photos so i can show everyone what i'm talking about.
It's all in the detail my man. That would be awesome though, you should def do that. I'm sure there's loads of poeople who wonder who you get the lines. I'm a massive fan of how ink streams onto paper myself so I can totally relate. I only write with certain pens as I'm super fussy about how they connect with the paper what brand do you use dude?
my main detail pen is a Pilot. i'm a big fan of the Kooh-i-Noor 'Nexus' art pen. but they usually start leaking... i like it for a slightly thicker, more solid line. they have an amazing (***AMAZING!***) line-width control-ability. so it's really easy to feather the start, and end, of a line. i use some Sakura, Pentel, and Sharpie as well.
Wooow. This is really kewl. Seems so eerie and mystical. Like the detail like how you did a very slightly darker tint for the sky and left the clouds white...which are shaped awesomely by the way. Also dig the hint of red for the changing place. Makes a small big effect. Really sic Nick